Friday, 14 March 2014

9 key frames unfinished









1 comment:

  1. Level 3
    C2

    Only 7 here Aaron - you need a close up of the bomb device - it's too blurry. Also shouldn't this be a Boy in the arab clothing?

    Maybe a CU of the hole being dug?
    Maybe a OSS of the security guard watching the guy digging - or you could use a binoculars shot of his watching him from a distance? You should probably add something that identifies him as a security guard.

    Crop the shots so they are composed more accurately and work on the exposure - level the shots that look slanted.

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